Thứ Sáu, 30 tháng 10, 2009

The one who I want to become in the future!!!!!

Have you ever think about who you will become in the future?.
I have.! I have thoght about my future many times. I've wondered "what is my job?" and "who will be my wife?"...
Time will answer all of my questions for my future. But, I really want to become a "Great man"!
.When I was 9 years old, my dream was becoming a pilot because I wanted to fly and I loved the sky very much. When I was a 10 grade -student, I wanted to become a car designer. I was attracted by the expensive and beautiful cars. And now, I'm studying in UTE to become a teacher. :D. I can't tell what will happen soon in my near future.:D
"I want to succeed and I will succeed!!" is my favorite famous saying. In the future, I want to succeed in my career, my life. I want to become the man who is respected by other people, want to be rich, want to have high-status. But, the most important thing I really wanna have in my life is the Happiness. I can exchange everything of mine to have Happiness.
If I were a rich man in the future, I will spend some of my money to help poor people, disabled people and orphan children. In the future, I want to join Army, want to be trained as a real soldier because I think "Steel rules make steel will". I love my country very much and always ready to follow " the call of DUTY".

2 nhận xét:

  1. hello!"great man".
    I think you really have some good ideas. But it is not well-organized. Moreover you have made some grammatical and spelling mistakes.
    I believe you will be a good man in the future.
    Good luck!

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  2. hello quyen!
    your dream is impressive.I think it is suitable on your charater.but you haven't underlined and classied the five basic sentence patterns.your written paper has good idea.I believe that your dream will come true.gookluck!Bye "great man"

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